Re: [閒聊] 晚上在公園等待一個多小時的女孩

看板FengYuan (豐原)作者 (Casper)時間16年前 (2010/04/14 21:25), 編輯推噓3(305)
留言8則, 5人參與, 最新討論串4/4 (看更多)
※ 引述《Kapono (Kapono)》之銘言: : ※ 引述《jimmybabyjas (Polor)》之銘言: : : tonight, we saw a lady stay around the park when we played badminton. : : She were be our audience almost more then half hour. It was so weird that : : she looked waiting for her couple. something like that.. but he never show : : up. During this hour, she got phone call two or three times. that was so : : sad. Just imagic that, A lady waiting for a man for an hour. How silly : : she is. :( wish she could find a good one. Finally, we were totally : : exhaused. : : 小小練習一下英文, 知道一定會有錯誤, : : 有錯誤的地方, 再麻煩各位多多包含摟, 歡迎指教... : : 這是晚上在圓環北路地下道旁, 火車旁的公園, 那看到的~ : : 分享一下 : Tonight, we saw a lady in the park whilst we were playing badminton. : She sat there and watched us playing for about half an hour. It is a bit : weird, so I supposed she was waiting for her boyfriend. It ended up the guy : didn't show up. She probably took two or three phone calls in the meantime. : That's way too sad. : Try to imagine a lady waited for her boyfriend for an hour. How foolish she : is. Hope she could find a better one next time. : Nevertheless, we were completely exhausted. : I change a few words. Hope you don't mind. FYI. ^_^ 對不起 一時手癢 修改如下 大家一起交流交流 We saw a lady tonight in the park while we were playing badminton. She was just sitting there and staring us for about one hour. It is a bit weird. I supposed she was waiting for her boyfriend, because she probably took two or three phone calls in the meantime. However, that's way too sad that it ended up nobody showed up. I felt pity on her. Nevertheless, we were completely exhausted after the exercise, but she was just wasting her time. How foolish she was! Hope she could find a better one next time. 這樣會不會比較清楚一點 -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 114.26.72.181 ※ 編輯: mayirock 來自: 114.26.72.181 (04/14 21:29)

04/14 21:50, , 1F
這篇目前最準確清楚~! ^^
04/14 21:50, 1F

04/14 21:52, , 2F
只有第二段倒數第二行小有一點疑義
04/14 21:52, 2F

04/14 21:57, , 3F
0.0 感謝一起分享~~
04/14 21:57, 3F

04/14 22:31, , 4F
標點符號跟連接詞要注意喔!
04/14 22:31, 4F

04/15 12:38, , 5F
She must call me. I will show up and take her home!!
04/15 12:38, 5F

04/15 21:48, , 6F
原修文中有提到打球打到筋疲力竭 我想據此表達在這一個鐘
04/15 21:48, 6F

04/15 21:50, , 7F
頭之中兩人運動流汗且健身 但那女孩卻一無所獲(第三段)
04/15 21:50, 7F

04/15 21:52, , 8F
這個句子的表達 我並非全然有把握 有高手煩請指點吧!
04/15 21:52, 8F
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